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31 August 2008 @ 04:28 am
 

Title: Shave
Author: [info]bagsandshoes 
Fandom/Pairing: RPF, Robert Pattinson/Kristen Stewart
Rating, word count: PG-ish, 794 words
Summary: “I’m not going to hurt you.”
Disclaimer: Do you think I’d share if I own them?
Note: The outcome of listening to Lay Lady Lay by Magnet feat. Gemma Hayes on repeat. It’s fluffy-ish. And I hope it makes you sigh.
 
 
 
The rain was a steady rhythm against the window, the rat-tat-tat-tat a balm to the silence. Someone had left the corner lamp on, softening the hard edges of the shadows and the yellow hue was warm against her sight as she lay on the bed. She felt oddly comfortable in a bed that did not belong to her, her head pillowed upon his scent, her body twisted around the cotton sheets.
 
 
She reached towards the nightstand and glanced at the clock on her phone. 2:02 PM
 
 
3 miscalls. Michael.
 
 
She let her phone clattered back on the table, twisting to her other side as the bathroom door opened.
 
 
“It’s two o’clock,” she said, a hint of accusation.
 
 
He half shrug, “You looked tired.”
 
 
“We’ve got an interview in an hour,” she reminded him.
 
 
His only answer was another shrug as he squeezed toothpaste onto his toothbrush. He disappeared inside the bathroom again, the mechanical sound of swirls joining the tapping of the rain.
 
 
She scooped his plaid shirt off of the floor and rolled up the too-long sleeves. She rummaged inside her bag until she found her own toothbrush. The floor was colder than she thought, and she tipped toed quickly to the bathroom.
 
 
He was already leaning on one side of the counter, the tube of toothpaste offered in her direction. She leaned against the opposite side of the counter; her bare legs shivered as they pressed against the tiled bathroom wall. She brushed as she watched him rinse, the mint spreading a burning trail from her tongue to the edges of her nerves, where it licked happily when her eyes studied the scattered hair on his chest that always teased but never tickled her.
 
 
He grabbed a can of shaving cream and her mirror image lifted an eyebrow.
 
 
“ We’ve got an interview in an hour.” He mimicked, an explanation and a defense.
 
 
He saw her rolled her eyes behind him, before she pushed him aside so she could spit and rinse. Once she’s done, she hopped on the counter next to the sink, wayward drops of water seeping into her, well his—their, her mind compromise—shirt. He stopped spreading the cream on his jaw, and it was his turn to lift an eyebrow when he saw her palm up hand.
 
 
“What?”
 
 
“Give me the shaving cream.”
 
 
“ Kris…”
 
 
“I’m not going to hurt you.”
 
 
He stared down at her, the words so easily believable in his small bathroom.
 
 
He shifted closer, settling in between her legs and he handed her the can.
 
 
A small dallop of white foam formed on one of her palms. She rubbed her hands together and reached towards his face. He closed his eyes as her fingers touched him, the slick feel of the foam and her silky skin a contradiction against his scruff. Closed off in his darkness, the tapping of the rain was louder, her fingers more patient than they were at night, and the mint odor appropriately fresh on her breath than booze and smoke. It was dangerously close to normal, yet he couldn’t help but leaned towards her touch.
 
 
He felt the cool blades tentatively glide down his jaw and he opened his eyes to find her brows dipped in concentration.
 
 
Her green eyes met him from underneath her lashes. “Hold still,” then she wrapped her legs around his waist, legs, eyes, and hands trapping him to her. His hands settled around her waist, a promise to stay.
 
 
He watched her work, the scrapping of the blades against his skin and her breathing a harmonious sound.
 
 
She bit her lip in concentration as she moved onto his neck. He stilled even more, resisting the urge to swallow as the blades passed his Adam’s apple. Her fingers splayed across the side of his neck, tilting it slightly, and under her careful ministration, he felt something shifted between them.
 
 
It surpassed every careful jab, stolen kisses, frenzied touches, and satisfied sighs they’ve ever shared.
 
 
She finished with a flick and dropped the gilette in the sink. With a wet, warm towel, she cleaned her work, erasing the extra cream off of his face. And all the while, he tightened his hold on her, irrationally fearing the end of this sudden intimacy.
 
 
He pulled her closer when she let go of the towel. She laughed but stopped when her body aligned with his, the face that she had carefully shaved burrowed against her neck. He always thought she had a lovely neck, graceful and lean, perfect for kisses in the dark. She sighed when he rubbed his clean jaw against her collarbone.
 
 
“Thank you. You did a perfect job,” he mumbled against her skin.
 
 
“Perfect,” she murmured in agreement, and wrapped her arms around him.
 
 
Current Location: Jakarta
 
 
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( 52 comments — Leave a comment )
Juls[info]jumatias on August 31st, 2008 12:10 pm (UTC)
Wow, this was so good. Amazing.
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on August 31st, 2008 04:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading!
switchamacallit[info]switchamacallit on August 31st, 2008 03:16 pm (UTC)
That was really great - such a sweet moment between them. I loved it! :)
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 1st, 2008 02:08 am (UTC)
awwww thanks bb!
Amanda[info]zenkindoflove on August 31st, 2008 04:28 pm (UTC)
This is such a sweet story. It's a very intimate and homely moment between them, especially the way you set up their relationship as still sneaking around. I like how you shifted to Rob's POV once she started shaving, and this story gave me great visuals of Rob's jaw, chin and neck. *sigh* Great story!
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 1st, 2008 02:14 am (UTC)
I always find the act of shaving as an activity that is truly intimate in the sense that it involves the neck (yummmm) and before the electric shavers, letting someone else place a razor on your neck... well that's trust. I got warm all over when I wrote this. Thank you for reading!
Jenni/Jen/Jennifer/Jen Jen...you pick![info]jenni_cn on August 31st, 2008 08:52 pm (UTC)
*standing ovation*


That was lovely and romantic and so well written. :)
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 1st, 2008 02:14 am (UTC)
Awww... *bows*. Thank you luv.
lemmonsugar[info]lemmonsugar on September 1st, 2008 04:06 pm (UTC)
omg, that was sexy, hot and romantic. I completely loved it. Favorited it :D
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 1st, 2008 04:41 pm (UTC)
Awww thanks sweetie =D
"Hey you" should suffice: Twilight - Take my breath away[info]rosetapestry on September 1st, 2008 07:15 pm (UTC)
So adorable!!
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 03:46 am (UTC)
tee hee! They are aren't they?
[info]liv_elea on September 1st, 2008 07:59 pm (UTC)
Wow. Wow, wow, wow.
You manage to show and describe a simple, but intimate and meaningful moment in a relationship in a way that's incredibly intense and heartwarming.
Very, very well done. Please keep writing these, I can't wait to read more!
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 03:49 am (UTC)
I'm smiling like crazy... thank you for the kind review! I'm glad that it warmed your heart, and I hope I can produce more R/K fics in the future!
Deja[info]ohh_honeybee on September 1st, 2008 08:02 pm (UTC)
*sigh*
How beautiful.
I loved it.
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 03:51 am (UTC)
Thanks =D
Ai-nee ★彡: robert kristen MTV[info]itsmysunshine on September 1st, 2008 09:01 pm (UTC)
Niiiiceeee :D

Just curious, are you an Indonesian? :)
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 04:03 am (UTC)
Yuuup. I'm from Indonesia, but I've never lived here before. I was raised in the Middle East (Dubai anyone?) and now I'm attending uni in the States.
(no subject) - [info]itsmysunshine on September 2nd, 2008 04:24 am (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 04:48 am (UTC) (Expand)
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Dulce et decorum: RPattz/KStew[info]abbs34 on September 1st, 2008 11:17 pm (UTC)
DUUUDE!! :D:D that was brilliant.. no that was perfect ;) well done.
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 04:07 am (UTC)
Awww shucks. Thanks luv!
CaserzBlues[info]caserzblues on September 2nd, 2008 02:55 am (UTC)
That was awesome! I really liked how you made it very intimate and sweet.

Casey.
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 04:10 am (UTC)
Thanks!
Sarah: // RPattz VMAs[info]didibreakit on September 2nd, 2008 03:19 am (UTC)
Omg how cute was that fic?

It was awesome to read how normal it was between them...like they do it all the time.

Great fic, loved it!!
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 04:13 am (UTC)
In my head... they are SOOOO together in real life. Michael? Michael who?

Thanks for the comment.. and oi, I did read your fic and twas hot and gorgeous. Can I ask for more?
(no subject) - [info]didibreakit on September 2nd, 2008 04:23 am (UTC) (Expand)
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[info]lorelaievans on September 2nd, 2008 07:05 pm (UTC)
Ohhh I loved it. It is so cute and sweet. I loved how you described his feelings while she was shaving him. Very good, indeed *nods*
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 2nd, 2008 09:33 pm (UTC)
Awww thank you... and your icon matched the mood perfectly!
Elisabeth: actors. rpattz & kstew: so doing it.[info]kissingdaylight on September 3rd, 2008 07:53 am (UTC)
That was so interesting. Who would have thought a shaving scene could be so intimate and sweet. Great job!
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 3rd, 2008 08:05 am (UTC)
Thanks!
[info]alaskas_pudge on September 5th, 2008 05:28 am (UTC)
wow this just made my day :D cuteeee!! yet still sexy :) tyy!
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 13th, 2008 11:40 am (UTC)
Thank you!
Sarah: being with him[info]mysoulcries on September 5th, 2008 04:20 pm (UTC)
woah, that was really sexy.
really sexy!

x
bagsandshoes[info]bagsandshoes on September 13th, 2008 11:41 am (UTC)
Awww... thanks =D. Can I friend you?
(no subject) - [info]mysoulcries on September 13th, 2008 11:56 am (UTC) (Expand)
kaylee_lvw[info]kaylee_lvw on December 5th, 2008 02:23 am (UTC)
Wow...
Wow, That was honestly amazing.
I never thought something could be written so intimately.
Wow..
Like...
Really.
That's all I can say right now.


...Wow...
Mary[info]mangobaby on December 22nd, 2008 06:52 pm (UTC)
I stumbled onto your master fic list at such a bad time! I mean...I'm completely addicted to your stuff, but I have to go and actually be productive...*chews on lip...runs off to read more of your lovely R/K fic*

I can't even tell you how much I loved the sweetness of the domesticated!Kristen, and the way you wrote this. Just, the whole damn thing. So good.
r_fluff8[info]r_fluff8 on February 8th, 2009 12:04 am (UTC)
luv it! amazing job!
luv how intimately normal it is...
and rob not wanting 2 let go at the end is just 2 cute!
more please?! :)
[info]omgitsjeehan on February 10th, 2009 08:46 pm (UTC)
dude! i absolutely LOVE this.
the cutest thing ever(:
forever_dawn78: RK make eyes[info]forever_dawn78 on March 25th, 2009 03:55 am (UTC)
It amazes me that something so mundane as shaving could be so intimate. Just envisioning his jaw, neck and throat is enough to make me faint. *swoon*
justliv615[info]justliv615 on June 11th, 2009 05:36 am (UTC)
Wow...
I loved this one, very short but very sweet.
Tirta[info]crazychitato on September 27th, 2009 03:18 pm (UTC)
my friend just told me to read this story and I read it, and love it! it's noce how you can make something like shaving seems romantic, LOL.
and I'm Indonesian too! haha. what a coincidence! ;) can you speak bahasa, by the way?
scottjohn4eva[info]scottjohn4eva on May 8th, 2010 04:42 pm (UTC)
fluff :) I LOVE IT x
[info]candyangel1791 on May 18th, 2010 12:06 am (UTC)
i remember this was one of the first ones i read, it's great!
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